Please review my sales page

Hi,

I think your sales page is really good. You highlight the benefits and the problems that your books will solve and I think it is all clear and well laid out and there are plenty of opportunities to "Click here to buy". From a customer point of view I think it's quite convincing, if I was looking for Photoshop reference stuff I'd probably definitely give it a go.

There are a few typos and spelling mistakes here and there so it could perhaps do with a careful proofread (e.g. "GUARENTEED", "its" when it should be "it's"). They are small points but nonetheless you are selling a professional book, so if your site hasn't been proofread then I might be inclined to think that the books might be the same.

Not sure how convincing the "was 90 dollars, now 60 dollars" is at the end. I think it's excellent value at 60 dollars. However, when I see big reductions like that it puts me off a bit. I always tend to think either that they had to reduce it because people just weren't buying or that it's just a blatant sales tactic to make it look more attractive and it probably never was 90 dollars in the first place. But that's just my personal point of view and I'm a cynic!

Good luck with your e-books.
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Thanks for your repsonse Onehourpa. I have made the changes you suggested.

To be honest with you, even if you don't have the sales page, the e-book should sell, because of the way you have laid down the main website. I have no doubt that you can produce quality from looking at your portfolio and people would buy from a person who knows what he is taking about.
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